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:iconlyons-gate:
I'm back...got stuff to get off my chest now....lol
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:iconsaiaii:
college station tx?

:wave: thanks for the devwatch! it's appreciated :heart:

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Is Imagination dependent upon Experience, or is Experience influenced by the Imagination?
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:iconjon-law:
Well well, what a pleasant discovery this has been! Thanks first of all for the encouraging comment. Usually such brief comments lead to people whose work (while cool or good, etc. etc.) I can't really get into--that's why this is pleasant discovery, because your work interests me very much. And because your name is Lyon. That's wicked, seriously wicked.

I see Marta has already gotten to critiquing your works, so I'll have less in the way of suggestions & whatnot, owing to her excellent critiquing pen; but in general I like them quite a bit. I agree re. the "ditch rhyming" suggestion. Your strongest pieces are the freeverse. They translate the experiences most effectively.

I also like your use of classic works of art as previews; neat.

+watch

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If I'm not writing I'm just sitting here changing oxygen into carbon dioxide. Like a baby. A little shit and piss factory, maybe one day a man. Be a man today. Write, motherfucker.
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:iconsorryi8yercat:
Hehehe, you said "her excellent critiquing pen," and you were referring to me! ::big smile::

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"As leaves are to limbs, so are your words to your soul." -Mark Z. Danielewski
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:iconjon-law:
Hey man, for real.

"Truthfulness is the foundation of all human virtues", including Insight; therefore, being true, you are also endowed with faithful & objective perception, which is requisite for proper critique.

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If I'm not writing I'm just sitting here changing oxygen into carbon dioxide. Like a baby. A little shit and piss factory, maybe one day a man. Be a man today. Write, motherfucker.
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:iconlyons-gate:
Thank You for your comments.
I will of course pay attention to my readers. I can't give up on rhyming all together but I think I will try to get better at it as time progresses. However I will focus on my free verse pieces and my short stories(which will be submitted soon).

---The Lyon
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:iconsorryi8yercat:
Thanx for visiting . . . I hope my meager input was something somewhat resembling what you wanted . . .

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"As leaves are to limbs, so are your words to your soul." -Mark Z. Danielewski
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:iconblueaeroplane:
Thank you very much for the watch. =D

I hope you enjoy your time at DeviantART as much as I have. :blowkiss:

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Since when are the first line and the last line of any poem where the poem begins and ends?

~BlueAeroplane :heart: ~cat-man-info
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:iconbrokennbymortals:
:blackrose: Hey welcome to DA...thanx for commenting on my poem...:poke:...:headbang:

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The slits
The cuts
The scars
The pain
the rubber bands
duct tape
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:icontomoegozen:
Welcome to DA, and thanks so much for adding me to your :+devwatch:!
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